Pinup 2

A quick pinup I did today, still screwing around with coloring.
I probably will see a bunch of things I did wrong tomorrow that I'll have to fix but here goes!

*edit* changed a few things that were bugging me.

Also, I really liked this image [link] by ~Gardek and tried to use it as reference, but wasn't feeling what I was getting. So I just kinda sketched around another version, still with the image in mind to get this. So I still kind of used it as reference!

Any comments or critiques welcomed!!